Charlotte Rosa Dèsirèe

[Mega]

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Player Username: Mega
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Character Basics
Character Name: Charlotte Rosa Dèsirèe
Character Age: 26
Character Race: Tiefling (Human/Demon)
Character Gender: Female


About the Character
Character Personality: One of Charlotte's most defining traits, is that she is a hopeless romantic. You could say she has an obsession with love, even if she doesn't find it herself. She is well-read, and her upbringing has given her a know-it-all and haughty attitude toward other people. She sees herself as guide to those looking for love, and has on more than one occasion tried to play matchmaker; especially where her sisters are concerned. Something interesting to note is that she carries herself in a "refined" manner when at her core she couldn't care less about such things. Trying to satisfy her own carnal desires is another of her most defining traits.


Character Appearance: Reference 1. Reference 2.
Charlotte stands at about 5'04" and has an hourglass figure. She actually has 2 forms. Her normal human form, and her succubus form. The only notable differences is that Charlotte gains horns, a spade tail, and a pair of black and red bat wings. Her eyes are copper colored. Also of note, her Succubus form has 4 eyes. Charlotte's choice of style reflects her "noble" upbringing, and consists of formal attire like dresses, or an ensemble like that of the above reference picture. She also wears glasses.


Battle Statistics
Character position: True Neutral
Character Spells:

• Hellfiraga:
5 Basketball sized spheres of cursed flame are created behind Charlotte which she then throws one after the other. They ignore "fire immunity" (but not hellfire immunity) and "fire resistance" in all things they hit. A fireball will consume other projectiles, even magic ones before fizzling out after impact. (2 post cooldown)


• Hot Spring:
Creates a pentacle at a target location, releasing a hot geyser of water after a second, sending the victim flying up into the air. As mentioned, the water is incredibly hot. (2 post CD)


• Cursed Aqua:
Gathers a viscous black ball of liquid in Charlotte's hand(s), which is then whipped several times at opponents. Charlotte regains health equal to the damage done. (2 post cooldown)


• Ice Of The 9th:
Creates a pentacle at a target location, creating a tall stalagmite of red ice after a second. It is searing hot to the touch. Will "freeze" anyone standing on the pentacle, constantly burning them until the ice is shatters after (1 post) a short duration. Cannot be melted by normal fire. But does nothing to "fire immune" victims. (3 post cooldown)

Character Abilities:

• Succubi Touch:
Charlotte can passively drain the vitality from anyone she physically touches. (Passive)


• Flight/Levitation:
Charlotte can fly/levitate using her wings at a speed slightly faster than her normal move speed. (Toggle/Passive)


• Darkvision:
Charlotte can see perfectly in the dark, though in shades of gray. (Passive)


• Dreamwalking:
Charlotte can travel to other worlds using temporary pathways through the realm of sleep. Can also get around a world using the dreams of others. If inside someone's dream, Charlotte can be kicked out if she is hit hard enough. The same method used to wake someone up will also work in kicking her out (Passive)


• Hypnosis:
Charlotte's eyes glow brightly for a moment, followed by the area "darkening" around her immediate area. Affects the closest person facing Charlotte, who can also see her eyes. They fall into a deep sleep for (1 post) a short time, or until they are hit. However, if Charlotte uses her Dreamwalking ability to go into their dream, they will stay asleep for much longer (3 posts max) until forcing her out. Anyone who moderately hurts the victim enough will force them awake, also forcing Charlotte out of their dream. (5 post cooldown)


• Fire Resistance:
Fire and heat do not bother Charlotte very much. (Passive)


• Sinful Infusion:
Hellfire gathers around Charlotte, waiting for the next spell. Charlotte's next spell becomes infused with Hellfire, boosting it's power by 50%. (2 post cooldown)

Character Forms/Command Styles: None


Character Weapons:

• Teeth:
In an actual battle scenario, it's unlikely that she will actually bite you. But if she does, it really hurts.


• Claws:
Of all her natural weapons, Charlotte's claws appear to be the most lethal. This is due solely for the fact she can extend the nails of her fingers and use them as swords. Combined with her physical ability, she can rend or punch through armor.


• Tail:
Similar to her claws, Charlotte can extend her tail a short distance and use it as an improvised whip or spear.


• Wings:
Yup, even her wings can hurt. Can either be used as strong bashing weapons, or kick up a gust of wind to knock you off balance.

Character Summons: None


Character Racial Ability:

• Shape-shifting:
Being that she is part succubus, Charlotte has access to a more demonic looking form. This form includes horns, an extra set of eyes, a spade tail, sharp teeth and claws, and wings. But she is only HALF succubus, so she is limited to these two forms.

Character Strengths: Smart, Confident
Character Weaknesses: Vain, Holy Magic, "Refined"


Character History: Charlotte was born and raised on a world where elemental magic was to the point that elemental spirits became the center of worship for the inhabitants. But then the inhabitants discovered Technology, and the balance of power shifted. Charlotte was born in the middle of the "golden age" of technology. She was the heir to what in more modern worlds amounted to "vacation resorts" that were commonplace in The Land of Monsters. But they were expanding to all across the world. Charlotte and her immediate family were unofficially Monster royalty in that their rule was not recognized by outsiders, nor did they rule over the entire continent. Still, they had their status and luxury.

Charlotte is the heir to this family enterprise, though she was not the only child. She had two younger half sisters from different mothers- what? Their father's a hedonistic demon at best. Each of them enjoyed some form of comfort, and had their own hobbies. Charlotte's was the various arts, and the pursuit of Love- actual love. Her family being the way it was, sharing your love with one person was a strange idea. But it was one she was interested in trying to find.

Charlotte's world was not spared from the darkness, becoming swallowed up by it due to reasons she was unaware of. But she herself then found herself in a new world that was always night. After ensuring that her sisters were no where on the world with her, Charlotte adapted to new life for a time. But after discovering that she could use pathways through the Realm of Sleep to see other worlds, she decided that her sisters HAD to be on a different world. Plus a world of eternal night was... meh. She missed the sun.


Writing Portion
Sample Post:

Entry 001: I'm keeping a diary to record my thoughts as I adjust to this new place- Traverse Town they call it. That's an interesting name. What is it the town is Traversing? The residents seem to be mostly human- though I have seen some rather adorable looking creatures with balls attached to their heads. Ally would just love them~ I think Diana would to, they have little bat wings and she seems to like those kinds of things. She'd also like all of the nooks and crannies of the town too. It's amusing to wonder what trouble she'd cause the locals. Well, it's been a long night. I can't say how long but now that I recall, it was night for the entire time I was getting my bearings of the place. That's another thing Diana would like- eternal night. I do enjoy looking up at the stars in the sky...

Entry 007: I am officially tired of the eternal night... It was enjoyable at first to be able to see the stars at all times of the "day." But now I can't help but miss the soft, welcoming rays of sunshine. I've also yet to find any traces of my sisters, or any of my family for that matter. What happened? I have also quickly discovered strange creatures that I vaguely remember seeing back home... before I ended up here. The locals are naturally superstitious and afraid of them. But my only concern with them is whether or not they are connected to why I find myself in Traverse Town.

Entry 10: This will be the last "night" before I set out. As I wrote in one of my earlier entries, I've discovered something remarkable with my ability to go into the dreams of others. There are OTHER worlds out there. Many of the dreams I went to seemed to be memories linked to actual places according to the dreamer, and these strange dark creatures kept popping up too. The memory is still fresh in my mind. When I actually confirmed this for myself was when I was suddenly pulled to another world through one of it's dreamers. It was a Jungle of all places... hardly a fitting place for a lady like myself. But at first I found it impossible to leave. Being able to see another sunrise made up for it though- and I had a breathtaking view near a waterfall. Regardless, I discovered that after I myself went to sleep I once again found myself back at Traverse Town. It wasn't a dream, as my clothes were still filthy- my poor dress... I digress. I've set my affairs in order and am convinced that my sisters must have ended up on a different world, and am determined to find out if nothing else. Ciao Traverse Town~


Kingdom Hearts
1. Which form will you choose?

The power of the warrior
The power of the defender
The power of the mystic Do you believe in magic?~

2. What is most important to you?
Being number one I already am number one~
Friendship
My prized possessions


3. What do you want out of life?
To see rare sights Does Love really conquer all?
To broaden my horizons
To be strong

4. What are you afraid of?
Getting old I DON'T WANT WRINKLES!
Being different
Being indecisive

[Ziya]

Hey! Sorry for the delay, IRL got in the way for a bit. Um... there's a few things that need a bit of clarification/modification.

Hellfiraga: How fast does the fire travel, and how much damage would it do compared to a normal fireball? Also, it really needs a cooldown, and the variation needs a much longer cooldown. The normal spell could be 2 posts, maybe one if it isn't much more powerful than a normal Firaga, and the variant probably 4 posts, since it hits all enemies.

Hot Spring: The ability is fine as is I think, but the cooldown needs to be more like 2 posts for that. For the variant, how long does it take to go off, how big is the blast, and the cooldown should be at least 4 posts.

Curse: How does it cur abilities in half? Is it just a strength/speed/damage dealt halved? Even if it is, I don't think anything more than a 2 post duration is gonna get approved, and it's gonna need a 4 post cooldown. Interestingly enough, the variant is fine as is, and could even have a 2 post cooldown instead of 3.

Ice of the 9th: How long does the red ice last? Immobilizing another player's character for longer than 1 post isn't going to work no matter how long the ice lasts, and it'll need at least a 3 post cooldown. For the variant, how large is the blast of steam if it hits the Red Ice, and how long is the cooldown for the variant? Keep in mind that using the spell or the variant puts both on cooldown.

Megalomania: Okay, so this one is problematic. Anything that affects the mental state of another character without their consent is power play, so that won't work at all. As for the buff, doubling strength and speed for two posts with a two post cooldown that starts after the buff ends is pretty much the max. Also, Damage over Time effects are up to the player who's character is affected as to how bad they are, so most people don't include them in things. The variant is better, though how much does it boost the next spell? It also doesn't really need the part where it hurts her, but it does need at least a 2 post cooldown.

Succubi Touch: how much does that drain the being touched per post?

Hypnosis: This needs some kind of warning, even if it's a flash of light in her eyes or something. How long will the character stay asleep is she uses the Dreamwalker ability, and will they still wake up if hit?

Also, you need an ability with a cooldown to have variants for spells. Something that basically reads "Can combine X thing with spells to use variant" and usually has a two post cooldown so people can't spam variants.

[Mega]

Kind of out of it from a long day of work so forgive my phrasing and ignorance lol

Abilities + Spells = variation?: I missed the part about abilities with cooldowns were needed. And reading it more closely, I don't see the benefit of devoting that many resources into it. I'm also too tired right now so I'm going to swap out some of the spells with their variations to help this along lol

Hellfiraga: I fixed the wording of it. I visualized Charlotte creating the fireball and then physically throwing it. So fast enough that someone even in full plate armor can do any number of things in response to it. I noticed you had a character that shot three fireballs at three different targets- or something like that. I guess weaker? Maybe as strong as a single one of those fireballs? The only other notable difference was that I intended for the fireballs to "nullify" other projectiles it may or may not hit; which I also added for clarification. 

A basic example of this is someone throws a ball of electricity at her, Charlotte throws the fireball at it. The two balls collide, with the fireball "burning" the electric ball away. Also like I clarified, "fireproof" only works if it's specifically "Hellfire proof." What can I do so that Charlotte can use this as her "spammable" attack?

Attacks Swapped: The "Curse" spell is now just the ball of liquid thing, and Megalomania is now called "Sinful Infusion" which is the variation spell of Megalomania.

Sinful Infusion: I'm honestly not sure how to answer how much of a buff it is besides "the spell hurts more." Also, the "hurting herself" was just a downside I was adding in hopes that it wouldn't get too high of a cooldown ^^;

Succubi Touch: Not a lot. It's just based on how long she's touching you for. So her grazing you with her nails will do very little.

Hypnosis: I did that thing. And I want to say yes? But it would have to hurt a lot. Like maybe not simply slapping someone silly to wake them up (unless they're really strong) but setting fire to their hand or something would.

[Ziya]

Okay, so if Hellfiraga can burn anything and keep going it won't be able to be spammable. If you have it burn one thing each then you could set it up to have something like "Can throw up to five before a two post cooldown." Would that work for you?

Sinful Infusion, with it's current cooldown, could be a 50% increase in either area or damage without having the "hurting herself" downside at all. Also, if you moved that to abilities then it would count for the variant ability if you still wanted to include those.

Hypnosis doing anything beyond 1 post will ultimately have to be up to the player who's character is being affected, unfortunately, but so long as you specify in the ability that moderate damage will wake them up then it doesn't have to be changed, other than adding an upper limit for how long they will be asleep. I think that three posts is probably the maximum there.

The Dreamwalker ability needs to have a clear method of forcing her out of their dreams when used like that.

Other than that, I think everything else works as it was changed. You might also be interested in a new style of character that I'm currently trying to work everything out for that uses charges instead of cooldowns, but it's still a long ways off.

[Mega]

I believe I got everything, let me know if I missed/worded something incorrectly.

I did move Infusion to an ability. But adding variations now would make this take longer lol

[Ziya]

Fair enough, and you can always add them in an update later, lol.

Moved and Approved