shnuy
Heartless
Posts: 11
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Post by shnuy on Feb 23, 2016 22:40:30 GMT -5
Member Information
Player Username: Shnuy
Current character list:None
Random Character Notes (Add anything extra here): Bippity Boopy
Character Basics
Character Name: Jordan Newman
Character Age: 16
Character Race: Nobody
Character Gender: Male
About the Character
Character Personality (Please give an in depth description of your character’s personality, must be at least 5 sentences):
Jordan is a very thoughtful and curious individual. however he doesn't understand emotions very well and doesn't display much else besides curiosity at times. This is due to not remembering anything from when he had a heart, that and for the two years of him being a nobody he hasn't had any contact with anyone else besides Master Derrick. perhaps all he needs is a friend to help him remember how to feel. He is too trusting of Derrick, he trusts him because he has no reason not to, he doesn't see why someone would lie. He's quite straight-forward and open because of this, and would quickly give you the answer to almost any question you ask him.
Character Appearance (Please include such things as height, hair color, eye color, body type, clothing, weight, etc. You need to actually write a description. You may include a picture for reference. Must be at least 5 sentences): Jordan is at least 5'9 and weighs 160lbs, he has a slim figure but has well toned muscles that he hides under baggy clothing. he has very dark brown hair and bright gold eyes, he has a small dark grey nobody symbol underneath his right eye, he always wears jeans and some kind of t-shirt. you'll never catch him without his sweatshirt as its the only sentimental object he has, its dark grey with a lighter grey tribal design, he also wears a communicator on his right wrist that receives messages from Master Derrick. On his left forearm he has a web of multiple scars from when hidden death was implanted into his wrist. He might be considered attractive if his face wasn't so blank all the time, it looks like hes constantly wearing a poker face.
Battle Statistics
Character Position (Hero/Neutral/Villain):
Hero
Character Spells (Max 5 spells, 10 spells for members with 50+ RP posts), please post spells in detailed list format:
Dark Orb: He surrounds his hand in darkness and releases a swirling ball of dark. Range:Travels for about 10ft before disappearing Cooldown: 1 post
Blades of Light: summons 6 blades made of light that connect at the hilt and then spin into a disk that he launches at opponents Range: travels for 25ft then disappears Cooldown: 2 posts
Wings of Sin: black wings of darkness sprout from his back and allows him to fly. he can also shoot a flurry of dark feathers that deal low dark damage and slows the opponent for 1 post Range for attack: 15 feet Duration: 3 posts Cooldown for attack: once per use of the wings Cooldown for wings: 3 posts
Lights Wrath: charges light into his hand, when he hits his target his hand releases the energy into an explosion of light that will propel what's hit backwards. he needs two hands to perform this. one of his hands holds the energy. the other hand holds his wrist to keep it stable until it's done charging. Cooldown: 2 posts
Decaying Grace: He surrounds his blade with light and dark energies to empower the weapon. he could also release the energy in a powerful crescent shaped blast but that ends the spell. Duration: 3 posts Range of Blast: 50 feet posts
Character Abilities (Max of 10 abilities allowed, 20 for members over 50 RP posts - please write your abilities in list form, starting with name,then description)
Blink: moves so fast it seems like he teleported, feet must be on a solid surface to perform this Range: 3ft Cooldown: 2 posts
Backup: can call upon a group of 10 dusks at maximum to command, (not very strong if the opponents are as strong as him) the number of dusks called determines the Cooldown Cooldown: 1-10 posts
Balance Breaker: Expels all light and dark energy from himself and is unable to use spells while this ability is active. his perception strength and speed increases. this allows him to use swordsmanship much more efficiently at the cost of his spells Duration: 2 posts Cooldown: 4 posts
Strong Body: Can take hits that would kill the average person. can also jump higher and block attacks that would break a humans bones. you might want to avoid a punch from him too, as he can punch through sandbags Passive
CharacterForms/CommandStyles(Optional - Limit 3 - Please write in list format): Power of the Heart: allows him to summon Hearts embrace for 2 posts. this form greatly exhausts him once it's over Cooldown: 5 posts.
Character Weapons (Maximum of 5 weapons allowed – members must have 50 posts before their characters may wield a keyblade):
Key Slayer: A white handled, hiltless, black single edged blade with 3 nobody symbols near the tip of the blade. where the blade meets the handle. a white tribal design goes halfway up the blade. This blade is most effective against Keyblades. when this blade makes contact with a keyblade the keyblade becomes unstable and will disappear for 3 posts if maintains contact with Key Slayer Or is hit by the blade enough times
Hearts Embrace:a ivory handle that connects to a red jewel heart encased in an ivory outline, the heart has swirling energy of the many heart's encased in it. the heart produces a blade made of pure light and dark energy. it greatly boosts the power of Jordan's Dark and Light attacks
Hidden Death: is attached to his left wrist under his sweater. shoots a throwing knife with the force and speed of a sniper rifle but with only the recoil of a magnum, however it has no scope or any assistance with aiming so unless your really close it'll be hard to hit the intended target
Character Summons (Optional field – no canon summons allowed – maximum of 2 allowed and maximum of 2 abilities each allowed):
Ronin: A type of nobody that has mimicked Jordan and fights with one sword like him. his-(at least they look like guys)-round head has the nobody sigil taking up almost all of his face, he has a crooked line of a mouth that tends to show up on nobodies. he however seems to lose interest if the battle doesn't end quickly. Sonic Strike: uses an ability like Blink but only in its arms, this allows him to do a single swipe faster than the eye can see Shockwave: swings his sword with white energy to cause a Shockwave towards the opponent. Duration: 3 posts or defeated Cooldown: 4 posts
Fallen Seraph: a powerful nobody that stands at 10 feet tall, has four arms and each hand holds a longsword. has wings big enough to be intimidating but too small to fly with Giga Blast: stabs swords into the ground and brings its 4 hands together to make an energy ball that will explode on contact after it launches it Uh oh...: it combines all of its swords into a massive greatsword and becomes more consistent with its attacks. Duration: 7 posts or until defeated Cooldown: Once per Thread
Character Racial Ability (Optional - Your character may have ONE passive ability that seems to have an abnormal affect due to being a particular race. Merfolk can breathe underwater, Lava creatures are immune to fire, that sort of thing): As a Nobody he can travel using the corridors of darkness, has a cooldown of 3 posts
Character Strengths (1 required): Perceptive, strategic
Character Weaknesses (1 required): is used to fights that he has to "solve" where there's a definite solution to each challenge, that's how he was trained. will have to rely on pure instinct during actual fights
Character History (Minimum of 10 sentences required and requires something included from the KH universe.): There's not much to say about what Jordan was like before he was a nobody, he was an "assistant" to Master Derricks experiments when an one particular experiment to turn hearts into a weapon went wrong and he ended up as a nobody. for a while Jordan wouldn't do anything except stare at the wall like an empty husk, after time he recovered and Master Derrick took an interest in him.(Master Derrick isn't really a good person, he's a keyblade master that's heart has been corrupted by darkness. he's told Jordan that keyblade wielders are evil and that he was the only good person with a keyblade. once Jordan displayed power he decided that he could use him to do his dirty work and not get caught.) The training he received was faulty, he was given situations that had one way of completing it, like a puzzle. after about 2 years of training he was given a mission, there's a couple of individuals Derrick would like to "study", and all of them were either keyblade wielders or they worked with one, some needed to be killed some needed to be taken back alive for experiments. He assures Jordan that they are dangerous and if they're not dealt with that lives will be lost. he may not understand emotions, or feel much emotions himself, but he still has some sense of morality, he feels like he should do what's right. Jordan believed him and prepared to leave.
Writing Portion
Sample Post (For first time character creators only. 10 sentences are required.):
Jordan woke up and sat up on his mattress, he calmly stared at the wall and let himself drift into his thoughts. Today would be the last training drill and then he would be sent out on to his first mission, he's never left the lab and has never seen the outside world due to it being underground, he knows that he lives in a place called sunset station and that it's near twilight town, but other than that...nothing. which is why he's really curious as to what's out there. will he see a heartless? or a new kind of nobody? or some kind of strange being that's totally new?. Jordan looked down and realized he's been tapping his foot, he then frowns "that's odd" he's never done that before. he barely has time to think about it before a voice comes in through the speakers, "Im sending you out early Jordan, no drills today" there was a slight pause "I'll send you the closest coordinates and the world of your target and you'll travel there immediately". there was a beeping on his communicator, he checked the message then stood up. he raised his hand towards the wall and made a corridor of darkness, as he walked into it he simply stated "leaving now". When he stepped out of the darkness he found himself in what Derrick called Traverse Town in his message. He walked out of an alley and saw a couple of people walking around. Jordan watched a couple wall by, "why are they clamping their hands together?". he would have given it more thought but he was once again interrupted by a beep from his wrist. He was sent a picture of his target, it seemed like they were nearby from the pictures surroundings. he looked around and spotted them, "time to get started" he thought to himself
Kingdom Hearts
Please Answer the following questions using the answer provided; apply the answer to the character you are creating. Custom options are allowed, but please try and stick with the defaults if possible.
1. Which form will you choose?
The power of the warrior
2. What is most important to you?
Friendship
3. What do you want out of life?
To broaden my horizons
4. What are you afraid of?
Being indecisive
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Post by JeY k on Feb 24, 2016 18:07:15 GMT -5
Hey there! Some quick fixes:
None of your bio fields reach the minimum required sentences (personality and appearance need 5 each, history and sample post need 10 each).
'Backup' needs a cooldown and you need to specify the number of dusks.
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shnuy
Heartless
Posts: 11
Hover Image: https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/56/84/55/5684553fe606611d95a4a13f115e643b.jpg
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Post by shnuy on Feb 25, 2016 15:38:56 GMT -5
I believe that fixes it, I also added an ability I forgot to write in
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Post by JeY k on Feb 26, 2016 12:16:37 GMT -5
That did it!
Approved.
Member Information
Player Username: Shnuy
Current character list:None
Random Character Notes (Add anything extra here): Bippity Boopy
Character Basics
Character Name: Jordan Newman
Character Age: 16
Character Race: Nobody
Character Gender: Male
About the Character
Character Personality (Please give an in depth description of your character’s personality, must be at least 5 sentences):
Jordan is a very thoughtful and curious individual. however he doesn't understand emotions very well and doesn't display much else besides curiosity at times. This is due to not remembering anything from when he had a heart, that and for the two years of him being a nobody he hasn't had any contact with anyone else besides Master Derrick. perhaps all he needs is a friend to help him remember how to feel. He is too trusting of Derrick, he trusts him because he has no reason not to, he doesn't see why someone would lie. He's quite straight-forward and open because of this, and would quickly give you the answer to almost any question you ask him.
Character Appearance (Please include such things as height, hair color, eye color, body type, clothing, weight, etc. You need to actually write a description. You may include a picture for reference. Must be at least 5 sentences): Jordan is at least 5'9 and weighs 160lbs, he has a slim figure but has well toned muscles that he hides under baggy clothing. he has very dark brown hair and bright gold eyes, he has a small dark grey nobody symbol underneath his right eye, he always wears jeans and some kind of t-shirt. you'll never catch him without his sweatshirt as its the only sentimental object he has, its dark grey with a lighter grey tribal design, he also wears a communicator on his right wrist that receives messages from Master Derrick. On his left forearm he has a web of multiple scars from when hidden death was implanted into his wrist. He might be considered attractive if his face wasn't so blank all the time, it looks like hes constantly wearing a poker face.
Battle Statistics
Character Position (Hero/Neutral/Villain):
Hero
Character Spells (Max 5 spells, 10 spells for members with 50+ RP posts), please post spells in detailed list format:
Dark Orb: He surrounds his hand in darkness and releases a swirling ball of dark. Range:Travels for about 10ft before disappearing Cooldown: 1 post
Blades of Light: summons 6 blades made of light that connect at the hilt and then spin into a disk that he launches at opponents Range: travels for 25ft then disappears Cooldown: 2 posts
Wings of Sin: black wings of darkness sprout from his back and allows him to fly. he can also shoot a flurry of dark feathers that deal low dark damage and slows the opponent for 1 post Range for attack: 15 feet Duration: 3 posts Cooldown for attack: once per use of the wings Cooldown for wings: 3 posts
Lights Wrath: charges light into his hand, when he hits his target his hand releases the energy into an explosion of light that will propel what's hit backwards. he needs two hands to perform this. one of his hands holds the energy. the other hand holds his wrist to keep it stable until it's done charging. Cooldown: 2 posts
Decaying Grace: He surrounds his blade with light and dark energies to empower the weapon. he could also release the energy in a powerful crescent shaped blast but that ends the spell. Duration: 3 posts Range of Blast: 50 feet posts
Character Abilities (Max of 10 abilities allowed, 20 for members over 50 RP posts - please write your abilities in list form, starting with name,then description)
Blink: moves so fast it seems like he teleported, feet must be on a solid surface to perform this Range: 3ft Cooldown: 2 posts
Backup: can call upon a group of 10 dusks at maximum to command, (not very strong if the opponents are as strong as him) the number of dusks called determines the Cooldown Cooldown: 1-10 posts
Balance Breaker: Expels all light and dark energy from himself and is unable to use spells while this ability is active. his perception strength and speed increases. this allows him to use swordsmanship much more efficiently at the cost of his spells Duration: 2 posts Cooldown: 4 posts
Strong Body: Can take hits that would kill the average person. can also jump higher and block attacks that would break a humans bones. you might want to avoid a punch from him too, as he can punch through sandbags Passive
CharacterForms/CommandStyles(Optional - Limit 3 - Please write in list format): Power of the Heart: allows him to summon Hearts embrace for 2 posts. this form greatly exhausts him once it's over Cooldown: 5 posts.
Character Weapons (Maximum of 5 weapons allowed – members must have 50 posts before their characters may wield a keyblade):
Key Slayer: A white handled, hiltless, black single edged blade with 3 nobody symbols near the tip of the blade. where the blade meets the handle. a white tribal design goes halfway up the blade. This blade is most effective against Keyblades. when this blade makes contact with a keyblade the keyblade becomes unstable and will disappear for 3 posts if maintains contact with Key Slayer Or is hit by the blade enough times
Hearts Embrace:a ivory handle that connects to a red jewel heart encased in an ivory outline, the heart has swirling energy of the many heart's encased in it. the heart produces a blade made of pure light and dark energy. it greatly boosts the power of Jordan's Dark and Light attacks
Hidden Death: is attached to his left wrist under his sweater. shoots a throwing knife with the force and speed of a sniper rifle but with only the recoil of a magnum, however it has no scope or any assistance with aiming so unless your really close it'll be hard to hit the intended target
Character Summons (Optional field – no canon summons allowed – maximum of 2 allowed and maximum of 2 abilities each allowed):
Ronin: A type of nobody that has mimicked Jordan and fights with one sword like him. his-(at least they look like guys)-round head has the nobody sigil taking up almost all of his face, he has a crooked line of a mouth that tends to show up on nobodies. he however seems to lose interest if the battle doesn't end quickly. Sonic Strike: uses an ability like Blink but only in its arms, this allows him to do a single swipe faster than the eye can see Shockwave: swings his sword with white energy to cause a Shockwave towards the opponent. Duration: 3 posts or defeated Cooldown: 4 posts
Fallen Seraph: a powerful nobody that stands at 10 feet tall, has four arms and each hand holds a longsword. has wings big enough to be intimidating but too small to fly with Giga Blast: stabs swords into the ground and brings its 4 hands together to make an energy ball that will explode on contact after it launches it Uh oh...: it combines all of its swords into a massive greatsword and becomes more consistent with its attacks. Duration: 7 posts or until defeated Cooldown: Once per Thread
Character Racial Ability (Optional - Your character may have ONE passive ability that seems to have an abnormal affect due to being a particular race. Merfolk can breathe underwater, Lava creatures are immune to fire, that sort of thing): As a Nobody he can travel using the corridors of darkness, has a cooldown of 3 posts
Character Strengths (1 required): Perceptive, strategic
Character Weaknesses (1 required): is used to fights that he has to "solve" where there's a definite solution to each challenge, that's how he was trained. will have to rely on pure instinct during actual fights
Character History (Minimum of 10 sentences required and requires something included from the KH universe.): There's not much to say about what Jordan was like before he was a nobody, he was an "assistant" to Master Derricks experiments when an one particular experiment to turn hearts into a weapon went wrong and he ended up as a nobody. for a while Jordan wouldn't do anything except stare at the wall like an empty husk, after time he recovered and Master Derrick took an interest in him.(Master Derrick isn't really a good person, he's a keyblade master that's heart has been corrupted by darkness. he's told Jordan that keyblade wielders are evil and that he was the only good person with a keyblade. once Jordan displayed power he decided that he could use him to do his dirty work and not get caught.) The training he received was faulty, he was given situations that had one way of completing it, like a puzzle. after about 2 years of training he was given a mission, there's a couple of individuals Derrick would like to "study", and all of them were either keyblade wielders or they worked with one, some needed to be killed some needed to be taken back alive for experiments. He assures Jordan that they are dangerous and if they're not dealt with that lives will be lost. he may not understand emotions, or feel much emotions himself, but he still has some sense of morality, he feels like he should do what's right. Jordan believed him and prepared to leave.
Writing Portion
Sample Post (For first time character creators only. 10 sentences are required.):
Jordan woke up and sat up on his mattress, he calmly stared at the wall and let himself drift into his thoughts. Today would be the last training drill and then he would be sent out on to his first mission, he's never left the lab and has never seen the outside world due to it being underground, he knows that he lives in a place called sunset station and that it's near twilight town, but other than that...nothing. which is why he's really curious as to what's out there. will he see a heartless? or a new kind of nobody? or some kind of strange being that's totally new?. Jordan looked down and realized he's been tapping his foot, he then frowns "that's odd" he's never done that before. he barely has time to think about it before a voice comes in through the speakers, "Im sending you out early Jordan, no drills today" there was a slight pause "I'll send you the closest coordinates and the world of your target and you'll travel there immediately". there was a beeping on his communicator, he checked the message then stood up. he raised his hand towards the wall and made a corridor of darkness, as he walked into it he simply stated "leaving now". When he stepped out of the darkness he found himself in what Derrick called Traverse Town in his message. He walked out of an alley and saw a couple of people walking around. Jordan watched a couple wall by, "why are they clamping their hands together?". he would have given it more thought but he was once again interrupted by a beep from his wrist. He was sent a picture of his target, it seemed like they were nearby from the pictures surroundings. he looked around and spotted them, "time to get started" he thought to himself
Kingdom Hearts
Please Answer the following questions using the answer provided; apply the answer to the character you are creating. Custom options are allowed, but please try and stick with the defaults if possible.
1. Which form will you choose?
The power of the warrior
2. What is most important to you?
Friendship
3. What do you want out of life?
To broaden my horizons
4. What are you afraid of?
Being indecisive
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